Dear Minister of Justice,
I'm writing in reference of the case of Mary Maloney. I'm appealing for a possibility of granting her parole. I believe in validity of such proceeding, because Ms Maloney at the day of tragedy was pregnant which means that she was in a period of hormone instability, that had a crucial influence on the act she has done. Pregnant women are more emotional, stressed and can change their mood very quickly. In addition to that, Mary M. received horrible news, which left her heartbroken, this situation took place in the wake of the emotions, it wasn't a fully aware murder. What's more, it's not right to deprive child from his mother, as a human being he has a right to live with family instead of being taken to orphanage. What's important is the fact that, such beautiful moments like birth of a babe often change human's way of thinking and behavior as well. Therefore I ask you Mr. Minister to show her some mercy and let her out of the prison earlier or grand her parole.
I'll be grateful for the consideration of my request
Most respectfully,
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You've used a number of good arguments in your letter (maybe even too many; sometimes it's better to have fewer but explained in more depth).
OdpowiedzUsuńHowever, it would help if you had divided the text into paragraphs where each paragraph deals with one argument.